Thursday, December 20, 2012

Chestnut

Hello, Hello! This is super late so I won't post the daily news. I drew a picture today :)


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Theres a story behind this picture. First things first, it's a horse. His name is Chestnut and this is when he was just a foal. Here is his short little story.....
 
Chestnut's parents were killed from a deadly disease that only came during the winter. Without any parents, Chestnut soon became stressed and miserable. The farmer was afraid that he was going to get sick also, so Chestnut was sent to a different farm, far away from the sick horses. The little foal felt scared with nobody to comfort him when he was put into a hay-filled stall. Alone, he started to slowly drift off to sleep. Suddenly, a gray and white shape quietly trotted into his stall. Chestnut looked up to see a beautiful mare, with sparkling black eyes. She bent down to brush snouts with him.
"My name is Crystal." She said softly. "Whats your name, little one?"
Chestnut tried to make his voice not crack. "My name is Chestnut."
Crystal settled down next to him and let the little brown foal rest his head on her shoulder.
Crystal had another foal, Lightning, who was about the same age as Chestnut. He was a dark gray and immediately started to show Chestnut around the farm. He found out that it was at the bottom of a huge mountain, where the racehorses galloped up the long mountain trail to the top.
Chestnut also met Shadow, Lightning's father. He was a solid black with a long hairy tail. When he first saw Chestnut he snorted, "So this is what Crystal is taking care of now? I thought we would only stick with one foal."
Shadow obviously hated Chestnut.
Crystal would spend time with the brown foal throughout the day, introducing him to the other horses and racehorses. Crystal barely paid any attention to her real son. Shadow was anger with Chestnut for stealing Crystal away, so he would take Lightning to the top of the mountain to explore.
One day, Shadow and Crystal were taking a nice evening walk, with the two foals having a little race behind them. Whenever Shadow was with Crystal, his mind spun with love and passion. They stopped at a small cliff that had another piece of land jutting out right across. This was a fairly short jump that the horses had to make when galloping up the mountain.
As the two horses stared out at the setting sun, Chestnut came racing up the small hill to them. He tried to skid to a halt but he was going too fast.
Chestnut slammed right into Crystal, making her lose her balance.
The gray mare let out a scream as she stumbled over the edge, where a large lake and a huge waterfall lay at the bottom of the long fall.
Shadow let out a high pitched whinnie as Crystal fell to her death, landing in the water and never surfacing.
She had drowned.
The black stallion spun around, misery and fury building up in his eyes.
"You are an idiot!" He screamed, his eyes blazing. "You will never be loved or comforted by me! I hate you! You should have stayed at your other barn and be left to die with those other diseased rats!"
Chestnut felt tears welling up in his eyes.
"I'm sorry." His voice cracked.
Shadow charged past him, kicking dirt into his little brown face.
Lightning followed, sniffling as he wept.
Crystal was gone.
Shadow would get his revenge.
 
 
The picture is Chestnut shedding tears as Shadow yelled at him. Sad, isn't it?
But this is only the beginning...


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This is my book cover.
I will be making a story blog with all my books on it.
Chestnut will be started soon...
 
 
 
Note: I've also decided to not really do any new items posts. My authors may continue to do that if they want to. I will post updates on my books and write stories about Jamaa legends! (If you don't already know, I LOVE to write stories).
Okay, Happy Jamalidays!
 
 

13 comments:

  1. aww, poor chestnut.....and poor crystal. i feel sorry 4 shadow cuz crystal was his mate too.
    i know that this will b a gud story! :D
    im gonna make a music vid/stormclan anime
    ive practised drawing the cats! and by the way, is Orangefur a girl or boy? cuz i drew him as a boy. dunno why but he looks sooooo cool!
    but yea its gonna b a gud anime and i might get a layout pad 4 christmas!
    Also, i was wonderin if u might like 2 voice ur own characters. i know a way but it might b hard. if not i think megan (my bff who is the only 1 who knows about anime) , she and myself will voice them.
    THE WAY 4 U 2 VOICE ORANGEFUR:
    u cood record urself saying the script (i will make that if u want) and send it 2 my gmail account and then i cood draw the mouth movments and then i wood place ur voice on top of it. (but it wood be easier 2 do it with megan cuz she wood b there, whereas u woodnt)
    but , yea dats the plan. but if u want the anime 2 be a surprise (wich i wood like 2 suprise u wit) then tell me.

    - DawnFox

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    1. Orangefur is a girl and I'll have to think about the voice recording thing :)

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    2. my dad sed it wood b possible but seriously hard...so is it ok if we jus leev the record voice thing behind?

      k so Orangefur is a gal...k.
      is it ok if i leev her wit the cool eyes, cuz they look cool!

      OH YEA!
      I scanned in the picture of Phoenix Flame but it was a drawing from last month and it was my first anime cat drawin so the back legs wernt good but im gonna draw some more back legs and scan em in on top of the picture nd rub out the old legs!!! :D
      so ill practise drawing the cats.

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  2. Ooh, I love the story! And the artwork is great.And poor Crystal, she was such a good horse... and Shadow is a meanie. :3

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    1. i disagree that Shadow is a meanie.
      I think he just judges people a bit harshly and wouldn't u hate someone if they killed sum1 u loved dearly , like a sister or brother ,friend or a parent?
      i know i would.

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  3. CC2,
    could i illustrate ur books? i dnt mean it like: ur bad at art
    or anything like that. i just love drawing and i dnt hav a layout pad or anything 4 the cat anime so i hav plenty of time 2 draw say, 10 illustrations per book? that is, of course if u want it 2 b a not-so-picturey-book, like a normal book thats not 4 little ppl.
    I LUV DRAWING!!!!!
    so cood i? i dnt hav 2 if u dnt want me 2.
    -DawnFox

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    1. thank you!!!!
      anyway, about this whole new clan thing, are you ravenwing or Orangefur
      because i can only focus on one cat not 2. and u are a warrior arnt you? i find it harder drawing kits.

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    2. You can draw either orangefur or ravenwing. It doesn't really matter to me :)

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    3. i hav the picture of chestnut crashing into crystal and knocking her of precipiece!
      im scanning it in 2day... i think.

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  4. Ooh, can I illustrate a few pictures, too? I'm not that great at drawing, but I love drawing, and I can draw a horse. :3 Not to steal Dawnfox's idea, I just would love to draw a little bit for your story.

    ~Lpiggy

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